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Flawed Fealty Pt 4 by aokamidu Flawed Fealty Pt 4 by aokamidu
More fleshing out really; it's been a while since I last wrote this.  And yes, my age is showing.  When I was growing up, people used to say "lash out" or "go off on one,"; I don't know what people say these days when someone loses their temper.  Oh well.
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Reagan700 Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2013  Student Digital Artist
life is so much simpler as a wolf...heh
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ahuizotl3 Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2013
Think twice Techie!
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Letdragon Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2013
I think you mean unpredictably, not unpredictability. XD
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aokamidu Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2013
Blargh - I wish Photoshop had a more reliable spellchecker... thanks for spotting that.
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Letdragon Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2013
No problem. It's what I do as an English teacher. :)
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Warshin Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Loving it! Keep it up :) and yeah, I've never heard the terms you used to say, but I guess nowadays we might say "get carried away" or "snap", not sure since english isn't my mother tongue.
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Ven4life Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
yeah
i live in canada and most people say "snap" or "get carried away" but we also say "get pissed off" or "rageing" i know its not very proper but being 18 this is what i hear most teens use as language
i also speak french and a little italian...
hope i could help
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Warshin Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Yeah same here, and great to meet another multilingual!
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Ven4life Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Like wise
Nice to mert you as well
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aokamidu Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2013
Figurati - gergo è relativo a dove vivi e cresci; gergo può variare, anche nello stesso paese.  Anche se io uso gergale inglese, spero che tu capisca cosa voglio dire.
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Ven4life Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
also its all good aokamidu i wont judge you on your english and if you ever need help lemme know k ^-^
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aokamidu Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2013
Thanks for the input - I've been raised in the UK since I was 4.  True, I did have speech therapy classes in the early part of primary school but since then, I've come a long way.  At any rate, for this story, I wanted to avoid Americanisms/Internet-slang so I wasn't sure how well 'lash out' translates to the youth of today.  In my day, people used to say "wicked" and then later "mint," or "pure skill" - so I have to be careful not to sound as archaic as Enid Blyton or one of those after-school specials ("Remember kids, just say no!").  ^^;
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Ven4life Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Lol
Its all good but if you need some yoith of today translations
Just give me a msg and ill try to help as best as i can
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Warshin Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Wait... you Italian? Your profile says you're from the UK! Or maybe you're multilingual. Sorry if I keep writing in english, but I'm just so surprised! Se sei ita, piacere x)
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aokamidu Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2013
Io non sono italiana; ho usato per parlare francese, spagnolo e giapponese però.  Ho fatto uno sforzo speciale per reagirà nella vostra lingua madre. 

It's thanks to GoogleTranslate and my sharp eye for grammar mistakes. ;p 
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Warshin Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Oooh I see x) well kudos for your effort! And wow, french and spanish too Clap
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SilverZeo Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2013  Hobbyist
Nice job on the lighting.
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aokamidu Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2013
Thanks - it's hard but rewarding; I'll be glad to reach the part when dusk falls - flat colours mean easy street ;p
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