Argh, fore-shortening and high angles... and true, lazy writing is lazy. But at least the blah blah blah will be shortly done with, along with this complicated lighting.
The writing seems fine to me! Love Oust's rage face at the top and the look on his face when he's feeling contrite. And Tetchy would thump me, but I WANNA HUG SO MUCH!
Nicely done work here.
Nice to see the next part, keep it up.
I've been waiting for the next of Flawed Fealty. Thanks!
Obligatory scary face panel. Because it happens. X3