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Starting Something Else - Pt31 by aokamidu Starting Something Else - Pt31 by aokamidu
Depending on how the composition works out, the next page could be the final one of this series so far.

It's been a while since I've last done a transformation scene, so yes, I'm a bit rusty. I'm not happy about how quickly O.J. recovered post-transformation but I didn't want unneccessary padding out. I've also had to rewrite what O.J. said, so yeah, there is an inconsistency between this moment and the memory of this moment happening in UEIE pt34. ^^; People's memories aren't perfect, really. And I'm just a bit miffed there wasn't room for any sound effects without crowding the whole page, but at least I stuck to a (mainly) consistent colour scheme this time on the whole page, unlike, I think it was SOSE Pt 15?.

Anyway, enough rambling from me. Enjoy!
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HelixDreamer Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
This already pulling at my heart-strings. X"<
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sundieu Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2011  Student Artisan Crafter
please say: yes, i remember you.
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MeddlerInc Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Niiice!
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Konishu Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2011  Student Digital Artist
Oh gooooood!!!!! It's so awesome!! :D
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TheW0lfen Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This is such a Soft Moment <3 But i would love if The big guy's underwear fell off :3
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Farel13 Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Real nice Kami... I love the transformation, BUT it's the weird thing... he starts with a gentle face ... then the ROUGH TRANSFORMATION and THEN back to being gentle. SORRY, just saying... his transformation looks angry, but he's not angry or anything...
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aokamidu Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2011
The way I've written is that the transformation is always going to painful - that's why there's the angry face, something that can't be helped in Oust Joust's case; it's rather like the equivalent of stubbing your toe; no matter what, you're always going to flinch. The pacing is bad but I planned to get this comic in under 35 pages at most and I didn't want to add on more pages than neccessary; it was only meant to be a quick transformation but I didn't like the cheap idea of him suddenly snapping his fingers and poof! They're not magicians.

I felt it was more important to show that it doesn't matter what form he is in, Oust-Joust is still the same character, and he really wants to have his fiance (future wife) come back to him.
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Farel13 Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
It's alright, it's your comic after all and you do have an explanation for it after all.
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bmarch Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2011
Big blue eyes full of feeling. That panel is superb. Poor Fauxjima. Obviously this won't be neatly resolved in the next (last) page. So, will there be a sequel to this, carrying on the story and tying up the loose ends? I can imagine Tim and Tom showing up to school all shredded. "Oh, boys. Really. You've been fighting monsters again before school? This will NOT do, I'm afraid. Honestly!"
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bmarch Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2011
Those big blue eyes have such tenderness. Poor guy. Ugh, this won't end well. Obviously Faujima won't be returned to normal by next page. So, there'll be a sequel to this eventually, showing how they straightened out this mess? Transformation looked great to me! Tim and Tom'll need to dash home and change, hee hee, showing up in class with shredded clothes: "We, uh...fell down, running to catch the bus." "Yeah. He fell first, then I did. Outch."
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